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Judy Solomon's avatar

Anyone want to hang with me in the cave? I'm not leaving!

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Connor Conor's's avatar

Yup. Truth. And a powerful essay on Ai. I don't know much about it, however, the format here and structure entirced me to continue reading. So I'll focus on your amazing structure. A favorite analogy of mine for the essay is the eye chart, when you this big E, at the top of the chart when you take an eye test. A essay should start with a big E, you know, something everybody can recognize. The gambit of the essay is not making any demands on you emotionally or intellectually. It's sort of setting something up that's undeniable. Something like "I'm sitting here at the window with this tree. It's snowing." I mean, the reader can't say, bullshit, I don't buy it. And then as the letters get smaller the essay can move into areas of ambiguity and subtlety, or fantasy and hypothesis. The essay should start in Illinois and get to Oz.

I do believe that you are a powerful thinker and that you have you mad skills. And because of this I wish for some sort of correspondence with you. I am going to kick it off by subscibring in the hopes you do the same. This will keep me accountable and motivated to leave comments such as this on your subsequent and previous posts. I imagine our bonded will power with these exercises will bear much fruit. do keep me on your long distance radar. in the joy of eternal collaboration from shore. 

Sincerely, Cc

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